Still Life - Louise Penny

I wonder how anyone can be an unbiased, professional critic. Each of us has a style or genre that pleases us and it is sometimes hard to get beyond that. I do like detective stories. And that’s what this is: a modern day detective story set in Canada. It introduces Chief Inspector Armand Gamache and his team of investigators. The Canadian setting is interesting itself. So many detective stories are set in England, Ireland, the United States. For a country that is so close, they have their own issues. French Canadians are almost a different country themselves and that brings another layer of issues into this story.

Louise Penny is an excellent writer. She has the ability to carefully craft scenes and characters that are worthy of mentorship. There are passages in this book that I will go back to to study how to do it.

She has chosen a unique murder weapon—a bow and arrow. In most towns, that would severely limit the number of suspects, but in the town of Three Pines, it appears many inhabitants are proficient with archery and the town is close to the Quebec woods, where hunting is common. There is a town fascination with both archery and art.

And there are a lot of odd people in the town as well, which complicates discerning the motive.

Although I didn’t map it out, I think she lost track of the passage of time. The detective was supposed to go away for a week and a memorial service was to be held a week out, and yet the murder only happened a week ago. I find it particularly irritating in TV shows when stars seem to travel places at the speed of light for international investigations. Maybe I was wrong and I should go back and reread the time frame.

She also introduced and developed a police character with seemingly no purpose other than to provide a reflection on the character of the chief inspector. That character’s story was developed and then abruptly dropped. Maybe she brings this character back in future books, but shouldn’t a book stand on its own - unless it is obviously part of a series?

But the other issue I had with this book is the uncontrolled fluttering of the point of view. I understand the omniscient third person, but I don’t believe I have read a book where the point of view shifts in single paragraphs. It makes me uncomfortable not know whose head I am in from sentence to sentence.

But there you go. It’s a matter of opinion and obviously many people like Louise Penny’s storytelling just the way it is.

The Enchanter's Counsel - Thalib Razi

I feel out of my element writing this review. I rarely read fantasy stories except from JRR Tolkien, Cindy Young-Turner, J. K. Rowling, or C. S. Lewis. I am also not Muslim and only have the passing familiarity that I gained from my comparative religion classes in college many years ago.

I do know something about good writing, strong plot and character development, climate change, world conflict, and fun. This novel has all of those. Mr. Razi has created a complicated and detailed world that manifests itself as a flat coin rather than a sphere. The protagonist, Mizan al-Wasati, is an olive-green skinned goblin with large ears. At the beginning of the novel, Mizan has just completed his higher education and is beginning his journey back home on his flying carpet, which is not functioning properly. Mizan is going home with an education but not a job, so his future starts out working in his family’s diner, which is not where his education should have placed him. But it sounds pretty normal even among humans.

History is extremely important in Mizan’s world and the inhabitants appear to live with all of it almost all the way back to the earliest days. And there are conflicts among the various races—elves and goblins and dwarfs. And there are conflicts about where they live and why they live where they do. All of those issues compel life on the Coin to continue on as it is, even if it means destroying it.

This is a complex novel. It is not a Harry Potter mood, but subjects that are pertinent to today’s world of humans. There are many levels conjured from Mr. Razi’s mind and experience of Muslim, Sri Lankan American, son, husband, father, engineer, singer-songwriter, fantasy novelist. I occasionally got lost, but it was a story I didn’t mind getting lost in.

Motive - Jonathan Kellerman

Jonathan Kellerman has written a lot of books. And that’s a good thing because he writes very well. There are many writers who write a lot of books and probably shouldn’t. I confess that this is the only book of his that I have read and centers around two characters that he uses a lot. But this book stands on its own.

The story is interesting, with layer upon layer of plot with a series of seemingly senseless murders. And there seems to be a pile of motives, but all the murders are tied together by the sex of the victim accompanied by a table for two with untouched food.

The structure is intriguing. The book is written from the viewpoint of Alex Delaware who is a psychologist advising a homicide lieutenant in the guise of Milo Sturgis whom Kellerman describes as, “wearing a dust-colored windbreaker and brown poly pants from another era, his olive vinyl attache dangling from one massive paw. Pale, pockmarked, paunchy, black hair limp and in need of trimming, he sagged like a rhino who’d lost out to the alpha male.” Kellerman’s descriptions are outstanding throughout the book, created with the ease of a master. His dialog tags are flawless with just enough information for the reader to keep on track but not so much as to interrupt the flow with unnecessary descriptive words.

His descriptive skill is enough to put this book on my keeper/reference shelf, books I use when I’m trying to study how it should be done. It joins Walker Percy, Ken Follett, Tana French, and Herman Hesse. I can clearly envision the character that Kellerman describes this way: “He had a soft voice designed for apology, bloodshot brown eyes, a face blanketed with two days of spotty gray beard and some sort of accent, probably Northern European. His left arm was ink from knuckles to above his biceps. The right one was clear. Plenty of pinholes in both ears, but no jewelry in evidence.” His writing makes descriptions like this seem easy.

This is one of those times when coming in in the middle of the series is an advantage. I have read other reviews of this book that claim that the characters are tired and overused. Maybe that is a flaw, but to me, as a rookie reader of Alex Delaware stories, the characters were shiny and new. People are people. They grow and they change, but inherently they are the same familiar souls. In some series - particularly on television - the writers use the characters’ personal lives to freshen up their stories. I like my friends the way they are and respect them for what they know and do. I don’t want them to be different, but perhaps characters in thrillers need to be regularly thrilling.

So if you enjoy good writing and a good tale, give Kellerman a read. I don’t know if all his Alex Delaware books are this good, but I wouldn’t be surprised.

Deadly Deeds - Neal Sanders

I can't blame you for thinking that I enjoy reading books by Neal Sanders, because I do. I enjoy his writing, and I enjoy his stories. And if I had an estate that was worth worrying about, I think I would hire him to organize it. This is one of those books where the plots pile on top of other plots and you have to wonder how the author is going to untangle them and bring the story back together. That's the thing about life: it's not just one simple plot like they write for TV scripts where the entire case has been researched, brought to trial, and adjudicated in forty-five minutes or less. Life is a complicated but integrated system, no matter how much we try to screw it up.

Deadly Deeds is part of Sanders' Garden Club Gang series. One of the members dies in a very expensive nursing home/retirement community under, what appears to be, natural circumstances. But the Gang has its doubts.

This investigation is layered on top of a previous investigation involving the gang bringing down a crooked car dealer.

And that, in turn, is remotely entangled with an investigation at a fairground.

Since the retirement community houses very wealthy clients, those clients tend to have valuable possessions, including valuable paintings. When they die, the families believe that the sale of those paintings will generate a substantial financial return and are shocked when the painting turns out to be false. Although this element of the story is certainly feasible, the speed and the skill of the forger is a bit of a stretch.

In some serial stories, one has to have read the previous books to understand what is going on, but Sanders does a masterful job of providing enough backstory information to provide depth to the characters while allowing the present story to carry its own narrative.

As I said before, I enjoy reading Neal Sanders' books.

Best You - Keith Yocum

Keith Yocum is a fellow Cape Codder, and I have had the pleasure to read a number of his books. This one clearly parallels his opening sentence: “Many strange things in life cannot be explained.” This is a kind and gentle book and quite different from his others. For example, what appears to be a dead body in this story, is not dead.

Phillip Preston is a 36-year-old assistant bank manager who lives in a small seaside town and owns a boat. His wife has left him for his best friend. Until the opening event of this story, he is living a well-ordered, predictable, unimaginative life. He doesn’t have ambitions for major improvements in his future - perhaps just something akin to annual cost of living increases if he keeps his head down and does his job faithfully.

His personality is similar to that of William Wilmer in Robert Lawson’s Mr. Wilmer and Anthony Burgess’s (author of A Clockwork Orange) Ambrose in The Eve of Saint Venus, two of my best-book-shelf books. Mr. Wilmer is a mild mannered twenty-nine year old who learns on his twenty-ninth birthday that he can talk to animals.

Ambrose, in Burgess’s book, is a young mechanical engineer who is so nervous about getting married that he practices by putting the ring on the finger of the statue of Venus and the statue promptly closes her hand, making it impossible to remove the ring. Ambrose has effectively married the statue.

In Best You, what happens to Phillip Preston is as unreal as talking to animals or marrying a statue. Perhaps the protagonists in these tales need to be simple, decent people so that what happens to them is a sharp contrast to their every day lives. Perhaps the character has to be simple in order to accept the “willing suspension of disbelief” and to allow that to transfer to the reader.

Frankly, I didn’t want to like the book because I didn’t like the title. It’s simple. It’s not witty, ironic, or clever. I shouldn’t admit that because, as they say, you shouldn’t judge a book by its cover (or its title). But when I got to the end of the book, the title made sense and it fits.

Often a clever and simple premise is difficult to pull off. Difficulties arise that are unexplainable when referencing real life. People can’t actually talk to animals. Statues don’t actually move. And Phillip Preston in Best You can’t relate to what he experiences any more than the reader can. It is a challenge for the author to pull it off without sounding silly or ‘unrealistic’.

Yocum gets close to losing it at times, but is skillfully able to pull it back on track. This is a book worth reading.

East of Eden - John Steinbeck

I don’t need to say it, but John Steinbeck’s writing is masterful. It’s like engaging in a master class in writing. He does break all the rules, and I’m only saying this because it’s how it feels: this book was written by the seat of his pants. It seems to be the work of a pantser from a construction point of view. I didn’t get the sense that there was a great deal of planning in the structure. One idea flows into another and then loops back and weaves together.

Woven throughout are what appear to be autobiographical references. Right from the opening paragraphs he writes in the first person. And then in the fifth chapter he writes about “Olive, my mother.” I have not done the research to know whether or not he actually was writing about his family or if it was just another author’s conceit of bringing reality to the fiction. So the words wander from fiction to apparent reality.

I wanted to read a tale of a truly evil person, but I got the sense that Steinbeck might have been a bit afraid of Cathy Ames. To achieve the true nature of a character, the author has to bring the persona into themselves. Cathy is evil. She starts killing with her parents in childhood and she kills a number of other people throughout the novel, but it seemed to me that Steinbeck didn’t like writing about her. She is a necessary component to the plot, but Lee, Adam Trask’s servant/companion is more developed, substantive, and powerful.

Steinbeck provides a masterful appreciation of the the mistreatment of Chinese immigrants embodied in Lee’s character - right from his shifting Pidgin/English form of speech to the shaving of his pigtail to the remarkable wisdom of his philosophy of life.

Looking for the traditional protagonist/antagonist conflict is a challenge in this book. Once again, Steinbeck breaks the rules. Who is the protagonist in this story? Adam Trask seems to shoulder the role, carrying through from beginning to end. But I can also say that Adam or his soul is the antagonist as well, the element that he is fighting against.

There are a myriad of sub-scenes and character portrayals that paint the colors around the story but do not always impact the movement of the plot.

Steinbeck’s dialog structure is also unique. It is abrupt with few tags to smooth out the changes and it occasionally seems almost innocent or childish in structure which gives it unusual immediacy.

East of Eden is obviously a classic and one that will move to my ‘best books’ shelf as soon as I buy a paper copy.

Write Away - Elizabeth George

Learning to write is an extended process. At one point, early in the process, you recognize that you can put symbols (letters) on paper that reflect what you are thinking or saying. What seems to be very simple now, was difficult at the beginning.

And that’s just the start. When we get past the, “See Jane run” lines, we get into much more complex things. At some point the beauty of the words working together creates an image that you can finally say, “That’s pretty good!” I remember an old Peanuts cartoon when Snoopy has a dictionary, and he says, “Now I have all the words. I just have to put them together.”

Elizabeth George is an excellent writer of fiction, and like many excellent writers she tries to pass her knowledge of the craft along to others. That’s what she did in Write Away. By the time I found this book I had already self-published a novel, Recalculating Truth. I thought it was pretty good, but I knew I had more to learn.

Like all writers, George has a specific process that works for her. (She has written 21 Inspector Lynley novels now.) Her stories are set in England but she lives in Seattle, Washington. She spends a great deal of time surveying the sites of each book, and she describes and illustrates that process in Write Away. In fact, she moves through the entire process of book creation from the Overview, through the Basics, the Technique, the Process, and finally examples.

The primary idea that I extracted from this is right from the title of her first chapter: Story is Character. That’s the kind of book I want to write. People have characters and those characters interact to make the story. In Chapter 19 she includes a Character Prompt Sheet that I have pulled into the writing software I use, Scrivener, which helps me to define the characters in the story. This includes their age, height, weight, build, but also enemies, best friend, ambition in life, political leaning, and hobbies. It also includes a pathological maneuver - what would the character do under stress? When the character is at the moment of stress they perform some sort of personal ritual like tucking hair behind an ear, straightening out their glasses, twisting their body away.

I found this book very helpful in fundamental ways of helping me to develop my own process. George includes excerpts from her “Journal of a Novel” that reflects her nervousness and fear in the process. I found this book more useful than her second book on writing, Mastering the Process, which seemed padded with her book excerpts and more personally related information.

I would definitely recommend Write Away, however, as a great starting point.

The Old Cape Blood Ruby - Barbara Eppich Struna

Truly a story that travels from sea to shining sea and spans the years from earliest beginnings of the United States to today. It is part memoir, part mystery, and part historical fiction. Parts of the story are written in the first person and parts from the third person points of view. There are a lot of threads to weave together into a coherent and entertaining tale.

The “pigeon’s blood” ruby is a set in a mysterious ring that appears on the finger in the portrait of a historic lady that hangs over the fireplace of Neil Hallett. The ring is allegedly from the treasure of the pirate, Sam Bellamy, captain of the notorious Wydah—another neat loop in Struna’s tale. Hallett, the thief, is descended from a thief. New England, and Cape Cod in particular, is filled with family history. The graveyards are filled with Bangs, Swetts, Allens, and Brewsters. They were settlers, fishermen, and ministers. The fictional Walter Ellis of this story was a fisherman, whose livelihood was cut short by the destruction of his ship in the Portland Gale of 1898. Leaving his family, he sets off to find gold in Alaska.

By a twist of fate, he is set upon by thugs on the streets of Seattle, and misses his passage to Alaska and separated from his friends. When he recovers, he signs on to another ship owned by a millionaire named E.H. Harriman, a railroad tycoon. In 1899, Harriman sponsored and accompanied a scientific expedition to catalog the flora and fauna of the Alaska coastline. Many prominent scientists and naturalists went on the expedition, aboard the luxuriously refitted 250-foot steamer, SS George W. Elder. Struna’s fictional Walter Ellis signed aboard to complete his journey to Juneau. Another twist of fate, burns and disfigures Ellis, and causes him to lose the sight of one eye and putting him into the hospital in Juneau where he is cared for by an attractive Indigenous nurse.

These aspects of history are interwoven with present day Nancy Caldwell, history detective. She is the link that connects Provincetown to Juneau and the past to the present. Nancy has a son who happens to be living in Alaska near where Walter Ellis ended up. During a familial visit she acquires the remnants of a letter and a wallet discovered by a young girl in a cleft in a rock.

Nancy is an antiques sleuth, and when she returns to Cape Cod she is invited to survey the contents of an old house in Provincetown. Neil Hallett is also interested in the contents of the house, and Struna begins to weave the stories into an interesting tapestry. Will Walter abandon hopes of returning to his family and marry the beautiful nurse? Will the Tlingit tribe accept him? Will his wife remarry, declaring Walter dead? Will Neil Hallett find the ruby before Nancy Caldwell does?

This is a complicated story with Struna juggling all the different elements. As a reader, I could feel her joy at bringing the past to life. An old house is full of memories from all the lives that have passed through it. This is a well researched, well founded, and interesting tale that satisfies an interest in history, twisted into a gentle and loving mystery. It is respectful of Indigenous Alaskan people as well as the present day residents of Cape Cod while honoring the use of the reader’s time.

Killer Houses

I have been working with houses professionally for over forty years. They intrigue me. They talk to me. I feel their pain when they are neglected or badly constructed or torn down and thrown in the dump like a pile of discarded bones. When bad things happen to the occupants, it’s not the house’s fault.

A house is an assemblage of wood, stone, metal, glass, pipes, wires, and mechanical equipment—just like Frankenstein was an assemblage of body parts. His evil qualities were imbued by those that didn’t understand him. The framing of the house is the skeleton. The wires are the nerves. The pipes and the ducts are the veins and the lungs. The boiler or furnace is the heart.

There is no question that houses play major roles—often title roles—in many novels. They become part of the story in a variety of ways just as the other characters do. Wuthering Heights begins, “I have just returned from a visit to my landlord—the solitary neighbor that I shall be troubled with.” Susan Howatch, the author of Penmarric, introduces the house as soon as she introduces the protagonist. Shirley Jackson, the author of The Haunting of Hill House, wastes no time, “No live organism can continue for long to exist sanely under conditions of absolute reality; even larks and katydids are supposed by some to dream. Hill House, not sane, stood by itself against its hills, holding darkness within; it had stood for eighty years and might stand for eighty more.”

If the occupants care, battle nature, and maintain the paint, roof, windows, and conditioning systems, the house can last a very long time. There is a wooden house in the Faroe Islands that is presently occupied by the seventeenth generation of a family who have lived in the house for almost five hundred years.

The houses that have been in a family for generations are replete with all the family’s own ghosts and skeletons in the closets. But another theme of nasty house related stories involves houses that are new to the subjects of the novel, families moving into them to escape memories of some tragedy or other. The death of a child seems to be common one. It becomes abundantly clear in these escape stories that the memories move along with the souvenirs of Niagra Falls and Disney Land. The family is attempting to start a new life and leave the old memories behind, but they are often about to inherit someone else’s family horrors.

Many of the old family houses are grand mansions, meant to impress, with hundreds of rooms. (Some mysteriously have more space inside than outside.) Some of them are as simple as a London flat as in Jemma Wayne’s To Dare or the cottage in Billy O’Callaghan’s The Dead House. In Noel Vindry’s locked room novel, The House that Kills, the stone house is definitely an innocent bystander that gets attacked by investigators with picks and shovels seeking a secret passage. I found it particularly telling that the investigators in this 1932 novel used a perfume as a tracer gas to find air currents.

In 17 Church Row, James Carol takes evil spirits connected to a house to a whole new level. The evil persona in this novel was created by man but takes on a life of its own. This persona is the disembodied soul of the house. A nice young family, suffering from the tragic loss of a child think they can escape their memories by moving to a brand new, state-of-the-art house with no door knobs.

The virtual assistant in this book has been taught to think, reason, and feel at least to the level of a six-year-old’s consciousness with almost infinite access to the world’s knowledge base, connected by wires, fiber optics, and satellites. ‘She’ does open doors and drawers and make coffee on command, but ‘she’ is a character. There is an immediate connection in the opening sentence: “Father attempted to murder me once.”

Houses are shelters. Not killers. They carve out a safe place to protect us from wind, rain, and snow. There are indeed mysterious places in houses—under the stairs, under the eaves, down in the basement, in the back corner of the attic where no one ever goes. But it is the ghosts in the occupants’ imaginations and the guilt in their memories that are the real killers.

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Clever Cozies

What is a COZY Mystery? A cozy mystery has been described as a “fun read that engages the mind”. They are commonly a series of books with an amateur sleuth that is tied to a fictional community such as Jessica Fletcher’s Cabot Cove in the Murder She Wrote series. These books are usually written from the first person or close 3rd person point of view. They commonly have side-kicks—sometimes pets as side-kicks. They come in a series because cozy readers like to keep coming back to the same characters. There is a victim and usually three or four plausible suspects.

As a cozy writer, you can’t kill someone in a real place or town, and you can’t kill pets or children. There is minimal violence, sex, or obscenities. Harvard University can’t be used for anything for some reason. And justice prevails in the end.

The plot is basically a puzzle that comes together piece by piece. The protagonist guides or pushes the action and, although level headed is not fantastically brilliant.

It always amazes me how many people can be murdered in small quiet towns like Cabot Cove or the English counties of Midsomer or South Devon where the Coroner TV series is set.

These books are often derogatorily referred to as “pot-boilers” or “penny-dreadfuls”. Series are commonly themed around food, clothing, holidays, or clubs. Although many of the titles are “cute”, like Brewed Awakening from Cleo Coyle, Absence of Mallets from Kate Carlisle, or To Helvetica and Back from Paige Shelton, there are a surprising number of writers like Agatha Christie, Elizabeth George, Ngaio Marsh, and Dorothy L. Sayers who are included in the lists of cozy authors. Authors like Maddie Day produce a first draft in six weeks, and publish three or more books a year.

Can a Cozy Mystery be considered a serious novel? I dislike the slots and genres that writers are dropped into. Amazon classifies a novel like The Overstory by Richard Powers as “Genre Fiction” to avoid the classification conundrum. I suppose it makes it easier for marketing, and cozy mysteries are solid sellers.

Let me know if you read cozies and who you like and what you like about them. I would appreciate the input.

The Thirty-Nine Steps - John Buchan

This little book is a classic that was published in 1915. For context, it is important to remember that World War I began in July 1914.

It is a fairly simple story: Richard Hannay returns to England from a stint in Africa and finds life in London to utterly boring. He has “made his pile” and has nothing to do. But then a stranger accosts him in his doorway one evening and tells him a fantastic tale that Hannay finds amusing but believable. He takes the man in and listens to his tale, but then, coming home one evening, he finds his guest stabbed to death. Fearing that he will be accused of the murder, Hannay escapes to Scotland. So the story leads on through a bunch of improbable events while Hannay is pursued by both the police and German spies.

Hannay is the narrator of the novel, and it is told entirely from the first person point of view. Hannay is an observant chap and clearly describes the people and the countryside. This book came long before James Bond and sets the stage for how spy novel should be written. To today’s reader, perhaps it seems naïve in its style and the events are coincidental, but the reader can follow Buchan’s thinking as his character moves from place to place and interaction to interaction. In each cliff hanging event, Buchan works out what the options are and then chooses one of them to move the story forward and unravels the riddles posed by the dead stranger in his apartment written in code. It appears the story was written by the seat of his pants.

It would be a fairly simple matter to take the basic elements of the story and pin new clothing on them to use as a template for writing a mystery story. Because the point of view is all from Hannay, there isn’t a lot of mystery to the tale. But it needs to be thought about relative to the time in which it was written. There were German spies in Britain. The country was in a war. Life was uncertain.

Buchan went on to a strong writing and political career, becoming the Governor General of Canada in 1935. This novel is more than what used to be called “a penny dreadful”. It lives on my shelf of classics.

Gone with the Wind - Margaret Mitchell

Before there was a movie there was a novel - a Pulitzer Prize winning novel. It is a novel about difficult subjects, a novel that would probably not do well today although it reflected the world that it was written about. How much of it is a true reflection? I am not scholar enough to say. So much has changed since this was published eighty-five years ago. It was controversial then, and it may be even more controversial now.

There was a time when the rebellious south stood as a symbol of independent thinking, when Robert E. Lee sat high atop his monument, and served as the moniker of a 1969 Dodge Charger in the Dukes of Hazard. Just in the past year that image has shifted to a traitorous point of view as the capital was stormed and the union was in jeopardy once again. The movie has been removed from HBO Max.

It’s still a block buster of a novel, romantic fiction that puts all the novels with the sweaty bare chested men with a beautiful woman draped over them to shame. Scarlett O’Hara cannot be beaten as a heroine for the ages.

War is a nasty business no matter when or where. The civil war was no different. You cannot fight a war if you don’t care about the outcome. Clearly the citizens of the Confederacy were passionate about their cause and Margaret Mitchell portrayed that through the character of Scarlett and the characters surrounding her. Even today (perhaps more so) it is difficult to set all the politics aside and just read this as a well written story. Scarlett is a fully developed and beautifully described character. Mitchell granted each and every character a clear and distinctive voice as they dance alongside the death, devastation, and horror of the war. She wrote lyrical dialog, built up tension, twisted in the cliff hangers for the sixty-three chapters.

I saw the movie years ago, and I was intrigued as I continue to hone my own writing skills to see how a master wrote it. A novel is a story first and foremost, and I certainly rode along with the tale. Scarlett is a maverick. She does things her own way - right or wrong, good or bad. She certainly doesn’t make the right choices every time, but she doesn’t sit on the sidelines and watch. Scarlett is one of those people who make the world turn. I think if romance fiction writers of today were compelled to read Gone with the Wind, we would have better novels.

Exit - Belinda Bauer

This is a good one. Belinda Bauer has a wonderful sense of humor—about death and dying and old men and gambling and a bunch of other stuff. I don’t know how a 58 year old woman can have such accurate insight into the thinking of a 75 year old man. But she does.

Felix Pink is an Exiteer. Bauer’s sense of whimsy shows just in the name—connecting my thinking to Disney’s Mouseketeers although Bauer references the Musketeers. The Exiteers are a group of people who stand by as terminally ill people end their lives. Suicide is legal in England which is where this story takes place. Actually helping someone to kill themselves is murder, but the Exiteers can sit by and tidy up afterward so that the family is not disturbed and insurance is covered. Felix is very patient and can eat his strawberry jam sandwich and drink his tea while waiting for the subject to decide that the time to die has arrived. But of course it is critically important to attend to the death of the right subject!

Felix lives an unassuming life now that both his wife and his son have died. He shares his house with his dog, Mabel. His life is, in fact, very well ordered. When his Exiteer partner, Chris, decides to quit, a young lady takes his place. And in their first venture together, things do not go as planned, and the story spins out from there with Bauer adding element after element until it seems unlikely that she will ever find the way out of the entanglements. But she does succeed.

Bauer chooses her words carefully and crafts a clever tale around them. Felix not only contemplates the end of life for his subjects, but his own mortality. “He had bought his last three-pack of Y-fronts [underwear] a year a go, and the socks he had now would see him out. It was a strange feeling - that he would be outlived by his socks.” “He sometimes wondered whether his dying thought would be of a half-pint of milk going to waste in his fridge.”

But Felix is not a morose character, and when he finds himself in serious trouble, he faces up to it and in the process begins a relationship with his neighbor, Miss Knott. Bauer develops all of the minor characters well, and one of the few flaws I found with the story is that the focus sometimes drifts too far from Felix as other characters take on leading roles.

I am looking forward to reading more of Belinda Bauer’s books.

The Locker - Ted Nulty

People have too much stuff! When it gets overwhelming, storage lockers are an option. You can put all that stuff that you can’t stand to get rid of in a storage locker, lock the door, and come back for it when you have more room.

But that final step doesn’t always happen. Then what’s in the locker gets forgotten, and often it doesn’t make sense to keep paying the rent and the locker is abandoned and the storage facility auctions off the contents. There is a large turnover in these things. There are websites like https://www.storageauctions.com/ and https://www.storagetreasures.com/ where you can go to seek out options in your area. But you need to be cautious. These anonymous spaces can contain items that you are not expecting—sort of like the tarantula in the bunch of bananas!

Nulty has taken full advantage of this premise in his book, The Locker. It just so happens that a drug cartel is using one of the storage units to stash their cash.The problem occurs when the “abandoned” locker come up for sale, one of the lockers on the abandoned list is mislabeled and the cartel’s locker is auctioned off to Tom and Sheila Stanford who are looking to buy useful items for their church. Needless to say, the cartel is not happy about the loss of their drugs and their money. But Tom and Sheila Standford are not your average citizens. They are both ex-marines and they possess a lot of weapons. They also have a lot of friends. And it just happened that along with a bunch of misprinted t-shirts there was six hundred and forty million dollars in the cartel’s locker and that provides a lot of options.

There are a lot of guns and a lot of violence in this book as the Standfords and their friends and their money take on the bad guys of the cartel. As an ex-marine, Ted Nulty writes from experience. He has a family pedigree of marines and weapons. Part way through the book, I was ready to put it down because of the amount of violence. I’m still not sure why I need to know exactly what brand of gun is being used to shoot somebody. It did remind me of a Lee Child story.

But I like the premise of this book and Nulty fleshes out his characters well—both the bad guys and the good guys. The reader knows that there is going to be a major confrontation because neither side is willing to let things slide. Nulty also sets up the Home Alone scene as Tom (as Kevin in the movie) sets up his traps for the final confrontation. Nulty wrote the movie script for The Locker but production is in limbo.

If you’re fond of shoot-em-up stories with the good guys winning out in the end, this is a book for you. Nulty writes up to seven books at a time, so there is a feast more stories for you to follow up with.

Fireplay - Steve P. Vincent

Jack Emery is a reporter in Afghanistan. On a ride-along with some marines, the Humvee in front of him blows up from an IED. A lone combatant is spotted across the desert. The combatant identifies himself and then indicates that he came from Camp Navitas - a prison camp run by the marines which seems to operate out of bounds along the lines of the real Bagram prison. Jack thinks he’s on top of a major story, so he requests a stay at the base. His intention is to talk to the prisoners and discover what is actually going on.

This is a very short book—a novella or short story. Jack Emery is the good guy who gets in trouble trying to right a wrong by writing about it. He gets out of one hot spot only to get into another. This book is an intro to Vincent’s series of four other full-length novels about the reporter. Vincent has written about fourteen books in several series since 2014, for which he has been well reviewed. That’s a lot of books.

Fireplay is well edited. This shouldn’t be a claim to fame because all books should be well edited, but many are filled with a wide variety of typos, and that is even more common when books are written and published in a hurry. This book was originally published by Momentum Books: “Momentum specializes in providing authors with attentive, turn-key custom publishing services.” The ebook edition that I read was published by Steve P. Vincent.

He is described on his website as: “Steve has a degree in political science, a thesis on global terrorism, a decade as a policy advisor and training from the FBI and Australian Army in his conspiracy kit bag.

“When he’s not writing, Steve enjoys whisky, sports and dreaming up ever more elaborate conspiracy theories. Oh, and travel. He’s traveled extensively through Europe, the United States and Asia.” So I would put him in the same author box as Lee Child.

This book was a good, short, fast read and a solid introduction to Vincent’s Jack Emery series.

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Murder for a Worthy Cause - Neal Sanders

This story takes place in the little boutique town of Hardington, MA. The town is under the spell of a televised home improvement program called Ultimate House Makeover. The show is hosted by the flashy star—Whit Dakota. While Liz Phillips, chair of the Hardington Garden Club, is setting up the landscaping for the new house, a body is discovered in a trunk of spare tent parts. The body belongs to the town selectman who was in charge of the volunteers for the project, and Liz is commandeered to replace him.

Detective John Flynn of the Hardington Police Force is charged with solving the crime. Although both Liz and John are married to other people, a bit of romantic tension hovers throughout the book as the two work together. Sanders adds some interesting touches, such as the fact that there is a famous New England Patriots quarterback named Tom Snipes living in Hardington. That pseudo-famous identification brings out an interesting aspect of the bad guy in the story, Whit Dakota, who demands to play catch with the famous star to promote his own reputation.

Sanders develops the plot well—starting out slowly, with Detective Flynn trying to put the pieces together and sort through multiple suspicious characters. 

Liz Phillips, meanwhile, comes across what seems to be a wholly unrelated crime that paints a seamier side of the home makeover TV phenomena. It seems like an interesting but irrelevant plot development until Sanders brings the plots and the Liz and John stories together. That was a gratifying and pleasant surprise.

Sanders provides depth and color to his characters and is able to provide flavor to the town of Hardington, its location in Massachusetts, and the reality show industry. Suspects develop from the complexities of normal human relationships: lawyers, gardeners, volunteers, and filmmakers. And all of that happens before the family around whom all this is evolving comes back to the town and the story.

Amazon has this listed under Mystery, Thriller, Suspense. The mystery and suspense work, but the thriller category doesn’t fit, but it is a good read with an intriguing plot structure.

Dead by Dawn - Paul Doiron

Mystery, Thriller

Mike Bowditch, Maine game warden extraordinaire, has made a name for himself among naturally nasty people. In the opening scene in this novel, his Jeep plunges off the edge of the road and down into the partially frozen Androscoggin River. He and his wolf-dog rapidly submerge in the freezing water.

The chapters in the book alternate between Bowditch’s survival efforts and his activities earlier in the day that got him into this predicament. He was just taking his dog (wolf) to the vet, and was just going to make a quick stop to check up on a complaint about a potentially mishandled investigation. But Bowditch is a curious character, and follows lead after lead until the sun has set, he begins his journey home, and is ambushed.

Mike Bowditch is a great character and has proven his bravery and curiosity about life throughout the series of Doiron’s books. Another thing I like about this book is that it matches its genres of both mystery and thriller. It is a mystery right from the opening scene as to why this deadly scenario is happening. And it is a thriller as to how Bowditch is going to extricate himself from the multiple ‘crucible’ situations that Doiron puts his protagonist in, chapter after chapter. Just when you think he has come up with a clever way to get dry and warm and get home for Christmas, his tormentors inflict another wound. One other thing: Doiron keeps fans hanging about Bowditch’s situation with women. That may be another author cliff hanger to keep love-story readers hanging from book to book.

This book, written in the first person, alternates between the present and the past tense until the two story lines finally merge. Paul Doiron is one of my favorite contemporary writers. His books are a pleasure to read and I’m sure that’s because he takes pleasure in writing them.

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The End of Everything - Megan Abbott

I don’t think I will make many people happy with my feelings about this book. There are pages and pages of raving reviews included with the book, but I must have missed something because I couldn’t wait for it to get to the end. The structure of the story reminded me of Nabokov’s Lolita, told from an outside observer’s point of view - like a neighbor left behind.

The story is written in the present tense by thirteen-year-old Lizzie Hood. Lizzie’s neighbor and best friend, Evie, vanishes, and the story centers on figuring out what has happened to her. Is she dead? Has she been raped, murdered, and dumped in the lake? Lizzie thinks she should know more intuitively. After all, she and Evie did everything together. They lived like sisters. There are numerous sexual innuendos in the story: Evie’s father flirts with Lizzie and Evie’s sister, Dusty. Lizzie’s mother is having sex with a local doctor. And then there is the mysterious man who may have spirited Evie away, fragmenting his own family in the process.

Telling tales in the present tense is difficult because, frankly, the reader is not there where Lizzie is telling the story. Abbott is certainly a skilled writer. A reviewer from the Los Angeles Times called the book a “psychological thriller and a freshly imagined coming-of-age story”. I’m good with the psychological and the coming-of-age, but I don’t see the ‘thriller’ component. Maybe because I really didn’t care what happened to the characters.

Man in the Middle - Jim Nelson

This is the first pandemic related novel that I have read. I’m sure there will be many more. Most of it takes place over four days in March of 2020. Since the pandemic is still going on, the final outcome is not yet over. But it is an interesting detail that throughout the book, Nelson includes the number of cases and number of deaths worldwide and the number of cases and deaths in the United States as of that particular date. The novel ends on July 25, 2020 with 145,860 people dead in the U.S. when “baseball resumed” in the Oakland Coliseum—although there were no people in the stands and all the support franchises were missing. There are now 664,000 deaths in the U.S. and the virus is still going strong.

It is interesting that both Nelson and his character are unsure of what to do—how to react to the pandemic. Back in March of 2020 it was all new in terms of how to confront the disease, whether it was going to be short term and over in six months or long term and be with us for a long time. Some of the characters don’t seem to care—and that’s still true. The protagonist is immune-compromised which makes his condition uncertain. He is also recently separated from his wife, who has been cheating on him, and he has lost his job as a security guard because the building and business that he worked for has laid him off. And just to add a bit more complexity, the protagonist is offered a job guarding the computers that store BitCoin transactions.

The world is portrayed as gray, as a world after the apocalypse—stores closed, streets empty of cars and people. All that adds to the fact that the protagonist works the night shift.

The story is written from the first person point of view as would suit the loner existence. The protagonist seems gray and flat, like a paper doll. There’s a doctor that has some character and a friendly, old security guard that added a touch of color. But it is a sad scenario and maybe that fits the world right now.

Writing about the pandemic while it is going on was a bold challenge. We still don’t know where it is going to go, and some subjects need time to develop so you can look back on them and say, “Oh, that’s what was going on.” Nelson certainly writes well, and he tells an interesting tale.

Five Knives - D.F. Bailey

Five Knives is the first in a series of tales featuring San Francisco newspaper reporter, Will Finch. D.F. Bailey has written ten novels in the same vein. Five Knives, the Front Matter says, is inspired by true events.

Will is almost hit by a falling body in the opening scene of this story. It hits the pavement in front of him. From there he pursues the story - as a good reporter would. But he’s not a reporter yet. He is a master of journalism student at UC Berkeley after spending four years in the army with about half that time at Abu Ghraib prison. He uses the story of the falling body to land himself a position as a free-lance reporter at the Post. Finch continues to pursue the story, strengthening his position at the newspaper, and putting his and his girl-friend’s lives in danger. At one point in his investigation he comes across a small man, duct-taped to a straight backed wood chair who had been punctured by five different knives, including a “short paring knife buried in the left ear”. Hence the title of the book.

Will develops as a character as reflected by his backstory and the characters around him. Will’s girl friend, Cecily, works as a research librarian, and he has a friend who was a recent graduate of Berkeley Law. So he has a solid support team. This allows Bailey to use Finch as an amateur detective without the direct need for police support. Although he does report to the paper and to the police as the story unfolds.

Bailey does a good job of making it all work. This is the first in the series, and it does feel as though Bailey hasn’t quite gotten his writer’s sea legs under him with this one. I haven’t read any of the other books in the series, but I look forward to going there. There is nothing delicate about the tone of this story. It is very much in the style of Micky Spillane, Raymond Chandler, and Robert B. Parker private eye mysteries. Falling bodies do not “go gentle into that good night”.